Just asking...but would someone take a lok at my resume and tell me what I can do to improve?
A few things,
Proper show names(ex. The Music Man)
no abbreviations for venues(ex. Tuachan)
try to remain consistent with month names(November or Nov, but not both)
You might want to add an email address.
(get a generic one that's not in any way embarrassing or unprofessional)
I attached a copy that I revised to illustrate some of my above points.